中介模板味、流水账、开头平庸——招生官 90 秒就翻篇。粘贴草稿，免费拿 3 个最伤分的问题诊断（附招生官视角解释）；$1 解锁逐段修改意见 + 两版重写（保守版/大胆版开头与结构）+ 招生官读后印象模拟。Template smell, chronological drone, a forgettable opening — readers move on in 90 seconds. Paste your draft for a free diagnosis of the 3 most damaging issues, seen through an admissions reader's eyes. $1 unlocks paragraph-by-paragraph edits + two rewrites (safe and bold) + a simulated reader impression.
逐段修改意见（该删/该展开/该换位置）+ 开头两版重写 + 全文结构重排建议 + 招生官读后印象模拟（他记住了什么、疑虑是什么）。 可重新生成 20 次。Paragraph-level edits + two rewritten openings + a restructure plan + a simulated reader debrief (what they remember, what they doubt). 20 regenerations included.
写作辅助工具，不代写申请材料的事实内容，不保证录取结果；请确保最终提交内容真实并符合目标院校的诚信要求。草稿只用于本次生成，不入库。A writing aid: it improves your telling of true facts, never invents them, and no admission outcome is promised. Ensure your final essay meets your school's integrity rules. Drafts are never stored.